Originally Posted by bolognawarrior
Your drums sound great friend... I think you should let the track breathe a little though, it seems like it's in groove mode for a lifetime. I think if you dropped out the drums every now and then and showed off those nice pads and drones, you'd have a great track. Some gentle vocals would really help bring it to life too
Agree on both points. Needs a bit of change and maybe some female vocal snippets, IMO, would be nice, too.
Dropping the beat (as mentioned already) or maybe adding some extra percussion or layering an extra pad or two might give it that "breathe" it needs. The pad you have playing from about 2:18 to about 6:25? In all honesty, I don't know if it's interesting enough on its own (at least in its current form) to play non-stop and keep my interest for 4 minutes straight. Not sure what you can do to change that, but figured it worth mentioning.
That said, it's a pretty solid track. Crisp EQ on my cans and I love all the elements in the track very much. Nothing seems out of place to me, which is something I usually struggle to achieve with my own music. So good job!