Not looking at the other comments until I finish listening here and getting some initial thoughts down.
I feel like I'm always Mr. The Genre is Wrong, but this really, really doesn't sound like French House to me...ie; Filter House ie; Daft Punk. Maybe French House is something different now, but this falls squarely into the realm of Techno for me. It has almost no melodic/harmonic content which is always how I've split up House and Techno.
I kinda see after the half way point, that new vocoder-ish element being a little French House, but it's still pretty atonal.
Other than that I think it could be a pretty banging Techno track. The high hat samples I'm not a fan of. They feel way too clean/real for either French House or Techno. Too soft/natural and not gritty enough.
Overall the mix sounds pretty good--seems like you could sneak in some bass elements if you wanted, I don't think the kick is filling that whole spectrum as is (my studio is torn up and my monitors aren't set up properly, so take that with a grain of salt(.
I also agree with @[Only registered and activated users can see links. Click here to register]
--if you aren't commenting on other people's stuff or at least participating in other parts of the forum, its unlikely people are going to jump right on your tune to comment. And you only gave it a few hours.