K the 2nd half after the break is better than the first. Sounds really big-beat to me, the bass is straight out of a Propellerhead track. The drums are the same throughout, but the rest of the bass and stuff, you should either mix them together more (the acid stuff in the 1st half and the subby bassline i the 2nd) or just pick one to go with. The drum change up at 2:50ish is awesome. If you are going for a real techno feel, it gets a bit too break-beat near the end. It just comes off really "On her majesty's secret service"/ "Take California" to me. (great tracks, not techno).
There, hope that is what you were looking for. It is at any rate what you got.