[future] city at worlds end - [beta side] pluviomorph
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Old 13-09-2018, 09:37 PM   #1
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[future] city at worlds end - [beta side] pluviomorph

Ok, so here's the shitty thing about this track. I lost the project file a while ago, and this is the moderately mastered version. I have the waves L316 - but apparently I'm retarded and I can not get this thing to boost or sound quite right. Looking for any feedback on the overall EQ and levels of this... I've tried this on multiple studio monitors and headphones alike... I think this might be the best it can get. I wouldn't mind putting this on a beta side LP that I have on the backburner... but I dont know if its salvageable.

I can't make any compositional changes, but I can adjust the overall mastering and EQ.

Thanks for checking it out idmf homies.

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Old 14-09-2018, 09:29 AM   #2
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Re: [future] city at worlds end - [beta side] pluviomorph

keep in mind that my headphones are cheap and relatively loud, the mid tones some frequencies are a bit resonant and could be thinned out, i'm getting slight distortion on my headphones when listening at full volume for some sections, but it might be a different case on another set, maybe frequency band split the whole track and eq it so that the levels for some of the elements could be adjusted and maybe play around with the stereo field a bit more, its very busy which i like but subjectively the drums are too standard for me but it fits and is fine as is, everything thing blends well together and you did a really good job on the synth sounds, also its very well composed

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Old 14-09-2018, 09:51 AM   #3
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Re: [future] city at worlds end - [beta side] pluviomorph

Overall, that's quite an enjoyable listen - I enjoy the harmony/melody here and those little repeats that happen from time to time - so cool. A few things that I've noticed when it comes to the mix/master:

- it sounds too overloaded in the mids / low mids + bass to my ears - feels a bit muddy

- also, there's that deep sub that comes in at around 2:08 - it muds the sound to me and sits too low in the mix or at least does not sound clean there

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Old 16-09-2018, 02:43 AM   #4
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Re: [future] city at worlds end - [beta side] pluviomorph

Yeah bud I'd have to agree with everyone about the kids being a the direct focus of the track.

Maybe a few tricks from here as ideals could help as you don't have much control over the actual mix/tracks anymore:
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Hope you get it cleaned up some

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