Your embedded SC link is broken
- but thanks for providing the hard link.
I think this track would benefit from some shaping on the kickdrum, it's a little flaccid for house - some sidechaining for this style of music and EQ would definitely pump up the clarity and punch overall.
The synth work I feel could use a little verb or processing, they are a little stabby - sometimes sounds a little ahead or behind of the rhythm laid out. The bass line particularly has a kind of plucky clean to it rather than gliding and harmonizing.
Good start though, I think if you just polished some of the overall design and let the drums get more of the character out of the melodies, this would shine pretty nicely!