[IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla
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Old 02-11-2018, 11:33 AM   #1
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[IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Hi! I have a track I'm pretty happy with, but before to post it publicly I'd like to have your thought on it

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Edit: I removed the pre-mix version so here is the final track:

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Old 02-11-2018, 06:29 PM   #2
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

It's a cool tune. Nice and chilled, and I like the dub feel it has to it. I really like the short parts where you added jungle-dnb drums, and I think maybe you should add a bit more of that into the track.
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Old 04-11-2018, 02:43 PM   #3
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Thanks for the feedback! I tried a version with more jungle breaks but it didn't really fit the mood of the track, so I used it only for the transitions between parts. Maybe I'll try to mix the breaks a little bit differently though.

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Old 04-11-2018, 07:16 PM   #4
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

It's minimalist, but done well. I think you're audience will be able to appreciate this for what it is. There's only a few elements, but what is here is done very well, and all that space lets each detail of every element shine.

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Old 05-11-2018, 08:37 AM   #5
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Thanks! Cool if the mix sounds good, considering I haven't done any mix yet. I'll try not to mess it up while mixing ^^

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Old 05-11-2018, 02:19 PM   #6
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Quite minimalist, but in a good sense - I do like it! Waiting for the mixed version - the lows and low mids feel a bit cluttered here.

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Old 08-11-2018, 08:56 AM   #7
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Thanks! I 'll try to manage those lows/low mids!

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Old 09-11-2018, 01:34 PM   #8
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

And here is the final version!


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Old 13-11-2018, 11:01 PM   #9
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Sounds perfect through my system.
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Old 15-11-2018, 09:32 PM   #10
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Re: [IDM/TECHNO] Concrete - Yoraperla

Nice, the mix sounds much punchier and cleaner now! Good job!

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