[Downtempo] Aukopi - Proliferate 2
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Old 11-08-2018, 05:08 AM   #1
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[Downtempo] Aukopi - Proliferate 2



New version. Thinking about adding some rain ambience during the beginning and end but it is coming together as far as I can tell. There is a little more variety now. Reckon the mix still needs work but I'm still more concerned about the structure right now.

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Re: [Downtempo] Aukopi - Proliferate 2

1:25 feels too abrupt, the melody that comes after should sound stronger imo, whether volume or clarity as its reverb is overpowering it now.

4:59 that little bass fill is nice, but isn't very impactful, maybe adding more distortion or pausing the drums when it comes in could serve as a nice break/variation for the song.
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Re: [Downtempo] Aukopi - Proliferate 2

I don't feel like I should comment on the structure as I think that's really subjective, and if you like it, that's fine.

But... in terms of the mix, I think the drums could be punchier... they sound a bit flat and a bit too dry. I'd do a bit of subtractive EQing on the synths, and add maybe +3db on the drums overall, and a touch more reverb on the whole channel.

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