Hi, Honestly they are both good pieces of work. I can hear the influences from people like Matrix, Ed Rush. Optical etc,
If i'm brutally honestly i think your drum samples need changing and they could do with some more layers. I would say use old skool funk drum samples if you really wanted to sound like Ed Rush and optical but then you would just simply be trying to copy their sound.
Positives - Clearly Lots of attention to detail given ( major +), some really nice sounds, good vibe
Not quite so Positives - mix could do with a bit of work, drums would be happy with a bit more detail, stereo positioning on some sounds is a bit off ( In my opinion)
I would be happy to hear what you make in the future
all the best