Ya mon, dat tune sounds nice!
Ok now that we've got all of these fine elements consolidated, and the stereo image has been defined. How about using a transient shaper on some of the elements. The kick could be dialed in with a mid/hi polish of attack, and maybe a hair of sustain. Then the main snare almost full tilt attack, and 0 sustain.
Grab that main basssseee, do sameting or something similar as da kick.
Vox: have you used any de-ess'n? They also seem to have a few piercing frequencies here and there that bite harshly. Also are they all grouped together going into a send/bus? If so a compressor with a 2.1.0 ratio, +10 Threshold, -5 makeup, 200-230 release, 16-20 attack might gel;p to glue them all together.
The editing, mixing, and mastering are sounding crisp! Big tune dis! Just a few things i noticed right away, but once again am glad you came back with a update, and I can hear the hard work you put into this!
Thanks for sharing bruv!