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Old 19-08-2017, 09:14 PM   #1
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[Breaks IDM]-NOWFEEL-Breaks IDM WIP

This is a WIP not mixed in the slightest. My friend who I usually bounce Ideas off of is living the married life and I don't get his input nearly enough these days when I'm in the writing stage. So, wonderful people of the IDMf I need your help. What do you think of the composition ? What can I cut out and what should i focus on to make it better. Any guidance would be a great help!
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Old 21-08-2017, 10:46 PM   #2
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Old 23-08-2017, 12:42 AM   #3
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One last try any feedback would be greatly appreciated! I made the song public...


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Old 23-08-2017, 01:43 AM   #4
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Re: [Breaks IDM]-NOWFEEL-Breaks IDM WIP

Pretty fun track overall!

That intro is pretty simple.. and I feel is begging for a little foley or some sort of crowd dialouge to be mixed in behind it... this will hopefully give you a little mid range there.

When the strings come in, maybe automate the other instrumentation down a few dbs. That way we will get to hear them a little more.


When the same applies at about 1.31 ... my ear really wants to hear everything fall back while the pads, and the drum breaks are doin their thang!

I listened to this on both computer speakers, and monitors and felt as if i wanted to hear a few things maybe panned and only the "Main drum patterns", plucks to be in the center of the mix.


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Old 23-08-2017, 04:48 AM   #5
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Pretty fun track overall!

That intro is pretty simple.. and I feel is begging for a little foley or some sort of crowd dialouge to be mixed in behind it... this will hopefully give you a little mid range there.

When the strings come in, maybe automate the other instrumentation down a few dbs. That way we will get to hear them a little more.


When the same applies at about 1.31 ... my ear really wants to hear everything fall back while the pads, and the drum breaks are doin their thang!

I listened to this on both computer speakers, and monitors and felt as if i wanted to hear a few things maybe panned and only the "Main drum patterns", plucks to be in the center of the mix.


Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much for the detailed feedback !!! I can agree with everything you said . I haven't even begun mixing so when I do I will definitely keep what you said in mind , good ideas! I'm wondering if there's anything I can cut out to shorten the track or if the end is climatic enough ? Either way , thanks for the insight

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Old 05-11-2017, 01:41 PM   #6
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Re: [Breaks IDM]-NOWFEEL-Breaks IDM WIP

Absolutely lovely! I don't have much constructive to say to be honest. I love the sound, the transistions are super smooth and there's a great attention to detail that makes the song sound super alive. There's a lot of different elements meticulously stacked together, but it doesn't feel as dense as it is. Seriously amazing job!
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Old 05-11-2017, 05:45 PM   #7
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Yeah I agree too. I loved the track.Bit of automation in some places is not a bad thing. Personally for me, I would of brought the shaker down just a tad but thats just my taste

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Old 06-11-2017, 04:57 PM   #8
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Thanks for the feedback people, I totally forgot about this tune! I just updated an updated version of it , Thanks


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Old 07-11-2017, 08:39 AM   #9
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Nice track. Mix is lush and punchy. Very musical. Glitches throughout are very tasteful. Very nice juxtapositions
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Old 07-11-2017, 01:48 PM   #10
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