[Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)
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Old 01-10-2017, 07:33 PM   #1
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[Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

It's not really techno, but I don't know how to define it.

Feedback would be very much appreciated to take into consideration for my next productions!

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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

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Old 04-10-2017, 06:23 PM   #3
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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

As you're using a straight 4/4-Kick-Pattern and a bunch of electronic sounds and because of the tempo, hey, i'd say it's sort of a trancey house-track, at the beginning, as the dark, menacing melody kicks in it really becomes some sort of a classic 'Techno'.

I really enjoy the smooth and relaxed vibe of the tune! Maybe the vocals are a little bit 'loud' in the mix but beside of that, i like the drums (very pristine sound) and the deep, deeeep, very deeeeeeeeep pad/chord-sounds, even the tiny, dark melody is pretty cool. As so far no one gave you a feedback i expected some boring tune not worth mentioning, but to be honest, it's a pretty decent and well-made track i do enjoy. So, bigup!
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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

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As you're using a straight 4/4-Kick-Pattern and a bunch of electronic sounds and because of the tempo, hey, i'd say it's sort of a trancey house-track, at the beginning, as the dark, menacing melody kicks in it really becomes some sort of a classic 'Techno'.

I really enjoy the smooth and relaxed vibe of the tune! Maybe the vocals are a little bit 'loud' in the mix but beside of that, i like the drums (very pristine sound) and the deep, deeeep, very deeeeeeeeep pad/chord-sounds, even the tiny, dark melody is pretty cool. As so far no one gave you a feedback i expected some boring tune not worth mentioning, but to be honest, it's a pretty decent and well-made track i do enjoy. So, bigup!
Thanks for the feedback man!

I'm very happy you enjoyed it!

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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

Olá compadre x)

Nice job mate!
I like the sound selection, everything is balanced and mixes well with each other.

I would add some reverb to the vocals and maybe lower them a bit and maybe play a bit with the main melody to give some variation.

Bom trabalho
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Olá compadre x)

Nice job mate!
I like the sound selection, everything is balanced and mixes well with each other.

I would add some reverb to the vocals and maybe lower them a bit and maybe play a bit with the main melody to give some variation.

Bom trabalho
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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

Just to add that the vocals are indeed a bit too loud. Just checked in different systems and especially in small speakers, they come up a lot.

Lesson learned: Don't be a lazy ass and check on different systems.

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Old 25-10-2017, 09:30 AM   #8
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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

The seagulls at the beginning got me.
The voice also is cool, sounds like some sort of Gollum haha.

Nice progression.
doum doum doum doum. Beat. Yeah.

The results is a very chilly track but also god for dancing I guess.
I'd call it vacation Ibiza sound or something (just my imagination here).

The change at 2:00 is quite surprising since it becomes a bit frightening at this moment.
I would like to mention that the sounds were too saturated for my headphones starting this moment.
But I continue my listening with less volume.

The new effects developing in this part are very distracting to the ear too, so it's a good point.
Makes a bit like electricity misfunction or so.

"I am the hope and the dream of a slave"... Haha I love it.

You seem to have mixed diffeent styles and atmospheres, it results in an effect of contrast that keeps the person curious, well done sir !
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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

I guess it could be tech house? Not really familiar with the genre.

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I guess it could be tech house? Not really familiar with the genre.
Maybe it could be tech house yes, thank you for your input.

Personally, I don't think it is very important to have a super defined genre for the tracks I make. I am not a big fan of labeling and categorizing music too much. On the other hand, If it's not well defined it might be hard for listeners that like it to find similar music

Anyone that thinks differently?

Some food for thought

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Re: [Melodic Techno?] Boltzman - Ayam (Boltzman Remix)

I really agree with qantuum's comment!
I'm also impressed by the contrast and the story telling in your track, well done!
I like the bass mixed in the centre, it really makes the track for some time. But at the end it's a little bit too much maybe (too much in the face)

Cheers,

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