[ROCI]

give us some feedback!

[Drodo141]

Very spacey smooth and groovy
I like the glidey synth with the ascending arpeggiators and watever, everything sounds mixed fine except....


BUT TURN THAT FUCKING SNARE UP
Or make it a little beefy, maybe the quiet side is what you were goin for but to me it just doesnt sound right


Anyway this is a nice track man, keep it on!

[ROCI]

Originally Posted by Drodo141

Very spacey smooth and groovy
I like the glidey synth with the ascending arpeggiators and watever, everything sounds mixed fine except....


BUT TURN THAT FUCKING SNARE UP
Or make it a little beefy, maybe the quiet side is what you were goin for but to me it just doesnt sound right


Anyway this is a nice track man, keep it on!

yeah youre right i need to turn it up. i think i left it down a little. it has beef.

[Echoi]

Excellent track, have to agree on the snare, but other than that, got the right balance of sounds here. Sent me into a bit of a day dream.

[Lucas Loop]

really like the uneven feel which the hat causes! fat!!

[dj koni]

really "space" stuff nice to listening

[YakupDenizBilal]

Really nice space groove! Snare sound is too damn low!

[tvmcc]

Hey ROCI,

This is a really fun track! Thanks so much for sharing! =)

I am not convinced it is just a matter of turning it up, i think you could do with layering either 1 or 2 other snares in. Like one that has a little more tail, and one that possibly covers the 6.3k range. Your current snare does seem like ti would be the mic on the bottom of a snare, but you don't have a mic for the top of the snare and something catching the room. If that makes any sense?

The other thing that bothers me is the arp runs. At about 2.47 or so I really wan to hear them fade down a few db below everything else to give the other instruments room to breath and now have their solo time.

Such a fun track, will it be downloadable?

[alek]

Hey sweet jam. I especially like the legato lead, reminds me of g-funk. And the chords were well picked, they fit the mood nicely. I would turn down or cut some of the higher frequencies of the very bright sounding arp that's playing during most of the song. It's a little distracting to me at least. And this is a matter of preferencies, but I would also make the drums more solid, to give the song a sturdy bed to lay onto. Perhaps the more subtle and not too driving drums are what you were after, it fits quite well as it is also. Good job.

[ROCI]

Originally Posted by tvmcc

Hey ROCI,

This is a really fun track! Thanks so much for sharing! =)

I am not convinced it is just a matter of turning it up, i think you could do with layering either 1 or 2 other snares in. Like one that has a little more tail, and one that possibly covers the 6.3k range. Your current snare does seem like ti would be the mic on the bottom of a snare, but you don't have a mic for the top of the snare and something catching the room. If that makes any sense?

The other thing that bothers me is the arp runs. At about 2.47 or so I really wan to hear them fade down a few db below everything else to give the other instruments room to breath and now have their solo time.

Such a fun track, will it be downloadable?

it is now downloadable, but id wait till the snare gets fixed, im gonna be on that tomorrow for sure!

[Dudewill]

I would totally buy this track. It's so relaxing and has that great mood to it !
But indeed that high arp is a bit.. high? Haha.. It's ok with my headphones but when I listened to the track with my friends not too good logitech computer speakers the arp sounded a bit distracting. I couldn't decide wheter it bothered me or not, but came to the conclusion that it did

[ROCI]

Originally Posted by Dudewill

I would totally buy this track. It's so relaxing and has that great mood to it !
But indeed that high arp is a bit.. high? Haha.. It's ok with my headphones but when I listened to the track with my friends not too good logitech computer speakers the arp sounded a bit distracting. I couldn't decide wheter it bothered me or not, but came to the conclusion that it did

you talkin bout that glitter that play through the whoooole track? or the rising computerish sound? i will definatly fix it, let me know.

[ROCI]

heres the re-mixed and remastered track. and the last part slower. i feel it needed to be more slowerto give more of a screw taste since i am from the city of screw

[Dudewill]

Originally Posted by ROCI

you talkin bout that glitter that play through the whoooole track? or the rising computerish sound? i will definatly fix it, let me know.

I meant that glitter playing throughout the track