So, any progress meanwhile as you posted the little 2:30min-snippet already some time ago?
By putting this track into the category 'house' i'd say it's more the kinda 'house for the masses' with some heavy 'EDM'-influences (even 'EDM' could mean anything, i know *grin*) or as we germans say, it's pretty 'kommerziell'... As far as i can see it's a draft/sketch/idea, right?
Well, the vocal and the bassline are catchy and for sure that's a solid foundation to work in a club. But on the one hand it feels like that 'something' is missing, on the other hand i would even avoid the light fx on the bassline to make it bone-dry pumping and shaking, also that second lil' melody seems to need some gain at the volume?
Could be interesting how the finished track then sounds as for sure it has some potential for sort of a 'hit'. Not my cup of tea concerning the style, for now pretty simple as it feels like an idea you 'noted down', but i gave to admit, it it's so far catchy.