The background sounds and samples are really nice
But overall the track seems still pretty boring to me, i started skipping around after half of it just to check if there will be something happening.
It's basically just 1 musical idea stretched out for an eternity
And that idea is nice and cool for maybe 32 bars at a time but no longer.
It's not "going anywhere".
So yeah, I'd shorten the track and add completely new stuff, like a Hook/ drop especially, then you can alternate between parts.
Looking forward to the finished track though